Tetsuya Brad

Guest

Out Of Character

Name/Alias/Nickname:Brad

Age: 16

Screen Name: themetal16

Time Zone:Central

Role-playing experience:5 years

Average amount of time online per day:7

Have you ever Rped Bleach before? Yes

Have you been in any other Bleach role-playing groups? I have not

What is Hantarou's Bankai ?:He doesnt have one and i highly doubt he ever will

Are you applying for CC (Canon Character) or OC (Original Character)?:OC

What is your character? (Shinigami, Quincy, Human, Arrancar, Hollow, Vaizard):Shinigami

In Character

Family Name:Tetsuya

First Name:Brad

Age:273 years(appears to be 24)

Height:6'2

Weight:210 lbs

Division [Shinigami]:None

Type [Arrancar/Hollow]:

Personality (Basic description):Mean during midnight, kind during the day, he is friendly sometimes but preferes to be alone

Physical Appearance:He is 6'2 weighing in at about 210 lbs he has tan skin, he has a deep scar on his right eye, he has Pitch black hair and blood red eyes, looks scary and evil

History/ Biography:When he was young he was gentle and kind but when he was 12 years old his family died from being attacked by hollow, as some people put to blame without knowing who really killed them, brad was the only surviver of this, later when he was 17 he figured out he was the one who killed his family due to the fact that he would go crazy during a full moon and go on a killing spree but dont worry he got over this when he was 15 when a mysterious man gave him a neckelace, which had the power to let brad keep control of himself during full moons.

Zanpakutoh [Shinigami, Arrancar] Shinsei Daibaa, his shikai would be where his zanpakuto would transform into a 6 foot long blade that glows blood red and can cut almost anything in its path, but is usually inaccurate and wild.

Character image: None at this moment

Sample Post:Brad walked through the forest, he was on a journey to a unknown city that would most likly just be legend and wont exist, brad grew tired from the long journey and decided to sit under a tree to rest, he woke up senseing a hollow nearby, looking over this his far right he saw a hollow approaching him, brad smiled as he stood up and pulled out his zanpakuto and went into his fighting stance: Come and get it: he said mocking the hollow, the hollow charged at him from 10 feet away, brad also did this but at about half way to it he ran to the right a little then he slashed as soon as the hollow was about to slash him, the zanpakuto hit the hollows claw making a metallic noise, brad then pushed the hollow off making the hollow move back a little then brad slashed aiming for the hollows face, his zanpakuto pointed upward into a 90 degree angle , blood follow the zanpakuto going upwards and landing onto the ground some yards away, then the hollow reached for its face because of the pain, brad then sidesteped to the right of it about 3 feet from it he then slashed its arm, cuting it off blood squirted from it as it fell to the ground, then brad backfliped landing about 5 feet away, brad looked at the hollow as it was angery and charged towards him: Fool: he said once agian mocking the hollow, brad jumped up wards landing on a tree branch about 16 feet up, he then jumped towards the hollow, landing behind it he stabed backwards then pulled out, the hollow howled as brad then jumped up and slashed downwards at it cuting it in half, brad sighed: its already over: he whined as he then turned back towards the city that was now in view about 1-2 miles away, brad cleaned off his zanpakuto, moonlight reflected of it, brad put it away as he then walked towards the city::

Subject: Re: Tetsuya Brad Mon Nov 19, 2007 3:30 pm

There are quite a few issues here. First of all, I'm a bit confused by the mixture of the American first name and supposedly Japanese last name. Is there a reason for this? Considering his age for a shinigami, I don't think a biracial child would be very logical.

I'm also concerned about the apparent mixture of werewolf, vampire, and bleach legends in here. Nowhere does it discuss his current position as a shinigami or, really, anything related to the series (with exception to the zanpakutoh). It reads more as an application to a Buffy or Angel environment. The appearances alone would make him a bit of an outcast in the shinigami world. The application is very incomplete (only a sentence for the personality, a bare history, etc.).

If you'd like, I'd advise that you contact one of the admins for assistance on character creation. We're looking for OCs that have some thought put into them (a quick glance over the other applications will show this) and that fit into the world in which we play . You say you've played Bleach before, so I can assume that you should know the series fairly well.

Personally, I will not be able to assist you. I'm still on emergency leave and won't be back until after the holidays. Hopefully some of the others have the time to spare to work on this.